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Throbbing, choking, drowning,
An avalanche comsumes the last traces of life
Gasping, clawing, falling,
No soul can survive the corruption
Bleeding, pleading, dying,
The spirit trapped in flames of torture
Burning, screaming, crushing,
The mind twists as the body mutates
Hoping, praying, waiting,
Time stands still, an endless moment begins
Believing, lying, denying,
Two hearts embrace for the first and final time
Loving, conecting, failing,
Enternity ends, love is defeated
Disparing, faltering, remebering,
The end is the end, no point in fighting
Fearing, begining, ending,
The inevitable, the inescapable, the indescribable,
The End!
©2006-2009 ~Dragon-of-the-Arts
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This is my first shot at poetry so be nice!!! it's a tad morbid...*cough* but i was feeling depressed. But yeah...ENJOY!!!

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I like the pacing of this and the pattern that it follows- you have used some very interesting adjectives, and the end of the poem really does feel like the end.

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I WILL NOT TALK RUBBISH. (Except on Wednesdays.)
Walter- Shut the fuck up, Donny.
Are the fires of hell a'glowing? Is the grisly reaper mowing?
:iconhottieangels88:
very nice

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I don't suffer from addiction to Keanu Reeves or Chester Bennington, I enjoy every second of it. :love:

l L l I l N l K l I l N l P l A l R l K l My anti-drug :heart:
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F**kin hell that was amazing!!!
:icondragon-of-the-arts:
Hee hee, thanks :hug:...it's amazing what you can do when your depressed and extremely morbid lol

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:iconkaytishu:
Wow alex!This is amazing for a first time...actually, tis amazing anyways :D !!!
I really like how the verbs break up the poem into little sections rather than all the flowery stuff some poems go into, hope you keep that style if you write anymore...and you'd better do cos I would definately read it ^_^

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With Honour! With Glory! With Chips!
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